Tuesday, October 19, 2010

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on friday we went to the blue mountain. we stayed at david and della s house. it has a big garden with lots of colorful flowers and tennis court. on saturday we saw the three sisters and we went on the scenic railway. it was scary. then mom and i went shopping with della. we went to some a went to some antique shops and i tried on some old hats.

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